35% Revenue Increase… from Your Website!
By Glenn Murray | Advertising
Copywriter, Website
Copywriter, Article PR Specialist *
35% of visitors fail to achieve their goal when
they visit company websites! By following 2 simple rules,
you can increase your web-derived revenue by 1/3 or
more!
Renowned website usability researcher, Jakob Nielsen,
today (Nov 24) published results of his latest study.
His test subjects used 139 websites. On average, they
failed to find what they were looking for 35% of the
time. Shockingly, 37% of users couldn’t even find
company location details!
What was surprising was that users didn’t give
up. They generally found the information they were after
– but they found it at a competitor’s site!
So how do you stop potential customers falling into
the hands of your competitors? Nielsen is right when
he suggests user research. Yes, it’s imperative
that know what your users need at your site. But what
he doesn’t say is how to structure your website
so it meets users’ needs.
There are two golden rules:
- Write first, build later
- Write to your customer
Write first, build later
The real message on most websites is in the writing.
It makes sense, then, that the writing should determine
the structure.
Unfortunately, this is not the case for most businesses.
For them, the writing is an afterthought. They structure
and design their website first, then try to fit the
writing to the structure. This flies in the face of
common sense. When you speak to someone, you structure
your speech around your message. You don’t decide
on a structure, then change the message to suit!
For a truly usable website, you need to plan what you
want to say before you create the site – perhaps
even write the whole thing. The message – the writing
– should determine the structure.
Write to your customer
So how do you decide what to write?
Firstly, don’t think, “What do I want to
say?”. When you’re writing a website, you
have to think, “What does my customer want to know?”.
It’s a very subtle difference, but it’s the
key to engaging writing. And that’s what you want
to do… engage the customer.
Most customers will want to know the basics:
- What do you do?
- What benefit do you offer them?
- Why should they choose your service or product?
- Why should they choose your service or product and
not your competitors’?
- What does it cost?
- How can they contact you?
- Where are you located?
Your website has to communicate a lot of information.
And to make matters worse, you’re going to have
limited screen real-estate. Ideally, your customer won’t
have to scroll – especially on your homepage (all
your information will fit within a single window). And
you can’t fill the whole screen with writing, either.
The design and navigation elements take up about a third
of the window, and you should leave a bit for white
space (you don’t want to overwhelm your customer).
As a rule of thumb, you should expect to have about
1/3 – ½ of the window at your disposal for
the writing.
Chances are, right now you’re thinking, “How
am I going to fit it all in?”. Well, that’s
where your writing skills come in. Choose your words
very carefully…
Websites can be an extremely powerful piece of marketing
collateral. You can reach millions for just a few hundred
dollars. Unfortunately, your competitors can do the
same thing. It’s a level playing field, but there
are a lot of players. It’s important that your
thoughts are structured, otherwise your site will be
a mess. If your message is clear, your site will be
simple and easy to use. It’s all in the words…
8 More Reasons to Write for Your Audience…
- There are approximately 550 billion documents on
the web
- Every day another 7 million are added
- Workers take so long trying to find information
that it costs organisations $750 billion annually!
(A.T. Kearney, Network Publishing study, April 2001)
- Reading from a monitor is 25% slower than reading
from paper. (Sun Microsystems, 1998)
- Helpful content develops site loyalty. The average
person visits no more than 19 websites in the entire
month in order to avoid information overload. (Nielsen
NetRatings in Jan 2001)
- 79% of users scan read when online (Sun Microsystems,
1998)
- Information gathering is the most common use of
the Internet - 73% (American Express survey, 2000)
- 48% of people use the Internet to find work-related
information as opposed to 7% who use magazines. (Lyra
Research, 2001)
* Glenn Murray is an advertising copywriter, website copywriter, SEO copywriter, and article submission and article PR specialist. He heads copywriting studio, Divine Write, and is a director of article PR company, Article PR. He can be contacted on Sydney +612 4334 6222 or at
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